I don't know if you remember, but I posted one of my assignments that I submitted for school, the essay that is. And my teacher game me a 100, I was mad happy plus this is what she wrote.
You Essay Rocks!!
I don't know where to begin Priscilla! I could start with your fabulous
use of the word "Correspondingly" as a transition, or the
personification of "the rain pounding on the ground fills my ears". Your
essay impressed me from beginning to end. You are becoming a wonderful
writer! I am so impressed with your progress! Terrific job on your
thesis, details, vocabulary and transitions. You impress me more and
more Priscilla; you are a wonderful writer!
Mrs. Marbra
This about made my day :)
It's always cool when teachers like the stuff that you do :D
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